Talk:Lada Semakova -- Aiming for Perfection: The Pinterest Platform and Rise of the DIY Movement/@comment-27077326-20151029012955

Hi Lada,

This is going to be an extremely interesting research paper for sure. Your research proposal is surely intriguing. Personally, I'm not too familiar with Pinterest or what exactly it's supposed to do. I do hear that Pinterest is taking over the social media world by storm. Hence, it's great that you've chosen Pinterest. For someone as alien to Pinterest as myself, you do a commendable job in introducing Pinterest and explaining its usability and features. I find your research question very interestic and thought-provoking as well. The research has been very well done, as seen in your content and your sources. Great stuff.

As for edits, you've mostly done a great job. If anything, maybe try and rephrase the research question in a very simple and straightforward question. Also, you can add more power to your paper by minimizing on "I". For example: I shall consider -> "It shall be considered" or "It shall be taken in consideration".

Of course, no major edits are required. Those are just minor proposals. This research proposal does a wonderful job with its rich content and intriguing proposal. I look forward to the final report!

Good Luck Lada.

You're beautiful.